Yesterday, I sat in a bookstore thinking about
mysteries. Kids’ mysteries, particularly. How do they work?
Actually, they vary. Like adult mysteries, some
are more about the adventure of solving a case. I’m thinking here of the traditional
Nancy Drew mysteries (not the Nancy Drew Clue Book books). First, Nancy has to discover
what the mystery is. Further problems occur as she pursues answers. (She often
gets knocked over the head along the way—in real life, she would need to see a
neurologist for the repeated concussions.) Eventually, in a dramatic chapter,
she comes into direct conflict with the villain, triumphs, and the mystery is
solved.
By contrast, short mysteries like the Encyclopedia Brown stories have a clear,
quickly revealed mystery. It hinges on some particular fact or statement, and
in the Encyclopedia Brown stories,
the author breaks the story into two parts: the mystery, and the solution. The
reader can “match wits” by figuring out how Encyclopedia Brown solved the case,
then continue on to the solution to check herself.
Not all short mysteries separate the solution out
so explicitly (the Nate the Great stories
don’t), but they do generally turn on some one clue, so I started making a list
of different kinds of clues.
Some clues link the suspect to the scene of the
crime. Sometimes the suspect leaves traces on the crime scene (footprints, a
pocketknife with his initials on it), and sometimes the crime scene leaves
traces on the suspect (ink stains from the spilled bottle, red mud on his
boots).
Some clues involve discovering a falsehood in the suspect’s
story. Often the detective knows something that the suspect doesn’t. (Mules are
sterile. Oil paintings aren’t framed under glass.) Alternatively, the suspect
has forgotten a detail that makes her story impossible. (How did she buy an ice
cream when she was in her swimsuit and her money was still in her shorts’
pocket?)
Things that undergo change over time or under
special circumstances make good clues. (They also make good weapons in adult
mysteries.) One way in which change can be a clue is when it indicates that the
suspect is lying about time or about where he has been. (He can’t have been out
on the warm porch sipping lemonade for the past hour, because the ice cubes in
his glass are clearly fresh from the freezer.)
Another way that change provides a clue is by making
something more detectable. (The missing lunch is discovered in someone’s closet
because—phew, it’s gone moldy. Spilled lemonade brings out a message written in
pH-sensitive ink.) The problem with this kind of clue is that it isn’t to the
detective’s credit unless she is the one
who correctly identifies the smell, or notices the partial markings and
deliberately spills more lemonade to reveal the rest of the message.
I’m sure there are other categories I’ve missed. There’s
the locked-room puzzle (how could
someone have committed the crime?), as well as the “you had no way to know that
unless you did it” categories.Some might be combinations. Something that
becomes deadly as it changes over time, or that disappears over time, might be
the key to solving the locked room puzzle.
Now that I’ve made this list, I need to come up
with an interesting detective and a small world to set the mystery in. But that’s
a problem for another day.
Till next post.
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